the basic criticism that my partner and i received was on the formmation of our synopsis. our teacher felt that these were basically the ideas that we submitted. the synopsis should have been a bit more detailed. therefore we had to re-do our synopsis.
Mera lahore:
this short film will be based on lahore and its history.
Duration:
5 minutes
synopsis:
the film will start with a high shot where an old man is sitting on the ground with pictures and letters scatterd around him. these pictures would be of the old monuments of lahore like the Lahore fort, badshahi Masjid etc.
The next shot will show that the man is picking up the letters and pictures and pastes them opn the wall one by one. As he picks up these pictures and letters, he gets flash backs. in the next scene we will notice that the old man screams out loud 'i want my city back, i want my city back' and tears the pictures. the screen fades out and then there come two men in black attire. they grab him and inject him maing the old man dissy. it is later established(through voice over) that this man used to oppose zia ul haqs regim and therefore got arrested. he later goes insane and is in the mental assylum.
audience: 16 onwards
media institutions: Geo, Agg and social websites like Youtube and Dailymotion.
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Mera lahore:
this short film will be based on lahore and its history.
Duration:
5 minutes
synopsis:
the film will start with a high shot where an old man is sitting on the ground with pictures and letters scatterd around him. these pictures would be of the old monuments of lahore like the Lahore fort, badshahi Masjid etc.
The next shot will show that the man is picking up the letters and pictures and pastes them opn the wall one by one. As he picks up these pictures and letters, he gets flash backs. in the next scene we will notice that the old man screams out loud 'i want my city back, i want my city back' and tears the pictures. the screen fades out and then there come two men in black attire. they grab him and inject him maing the old man dissy. it is later established(through voice over) that this man used to oppose zia ul haqs regim and therefore got arrested. he later goes insane and is in the mental assylum.
audience: 16 onwards
media institutions: Geo, Agg and social websites like Youtube and Dailymotion.
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